I normally would not have picked this view. It is not as dramatic as many others available at this amazing park. In fact this may be the richest place I have been for subject matter. It seems there is one amazing view after another. From our vantage point there were countless possibilities. The beauty of art and the artist is the perspective and choices that are made. Most would choose the obvious, the cliché. Each artist sees things differently. It is a small thing and yet it is the biggest thing at the same time-if that is possible. Some would say that every painting done at Heisler is a cliché because it has been done an uncountable amount of times. I would say that what is in the heart of the creator of the painting while he/she is painting determines whether it is a cliché.
I was hesitant with this composition because the palm trees were chopping up the painting in such a way that my center of focus was confused. I had to move so that the palm's were in between the land and the rock in the ocean. This was a compromise because I had wanted to really connect the rock with the land through the motion of the ocean. When Saim came over for a quick look I asked his opinion. It was interesting that he did not give it until he was asked. This is a level of respect that I admire. It had nothing to do with the quality of my painting or the lack of quality; it was just how he was as an artist. He said I had too many diagonal lines running off the surface on the right and that I should bring up the lower right hand corner of the foreground. He also suggested having the water cut into the foreground to break up that diagonal.
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